http://malavredina.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] malavredina.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] borys_javir 2011-05-02 06:18 pm (UTC)

Задум хороший, правда трішки ритм кульгає=)
зачіпило, але трішки важко читати.
постійно збиваєшся з ритму...
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